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Emails to send to John's list for a promoton of John's new Mentorship Monthly Membership site. (This is doing really well and is an excellent value site as it happens to check it out click here)


 A Teaser Email

The Launch Email

The Follow Up Email


Teaser
Subject:
{!firstname_fix}, Tomorrow is the First Day of the Rest of Your Life!


Body:
Hi {!firstname_fix},

John Thornhill here,

"Tomorrow is the First Day of the Rest of Your Life!"

I'm sure you've heard that term before {!firstname_fix},
It's one I've heard so many times.
In fact - to a degree, I've always just smiled and given
out a false laugh, when someone has said it.

Well, it's just one of 'those' sayings isn't it
{!firstname_fix}?

If you're anything like me, you've probably done the
same, smiled, made some passing comment and
completely disregarded it.
I mean, one day just seems to roll into the next a lot of
the time and before you know it another week has passed
and nothing much seems to change.

However,
Every once in a while something happens that does affect
"The Rest of Your Life", It might be a major event, like a
marriage or the birth of a child, or it could be passing a
driving test or moving house.

Whichever way you look at it {!firstname_fix}, It's usually
something major to have an impact noteworthy of the
saying!

Think about it as we break it down {!firstname_fix}...

"Tomorrow"
That's just 24 hours away, what could happen that could
potentially change your life in 24 hours?

"The First Day"
That's like a whole new beginning, almost like a fresh
start to some people.
And in a sense it's true... Tomorrow is a new day,
a fresh start.

Will you be doing anything different to give yourself a
fresh start, to make a difference to ...

"The Rest of Your Life"
Wow - that's another thing we often just take for granted,
isn't it {!firstname_fix}?
But how often do we really think long and hard about the
rest of our lives?

{!firstname_fix}, You're probably wondering why I'm
getting all deep and philosophical...?

Don't panic, I wont be asking you to marry me! ;)
(My wife wouldn't be too happy about that!!)

But I do have an Announcement to make that will quite
possibly...
Affect The Rest of Your Life {!firstname_fix}!

But Only in a Really Good Way.

I'm sure you could do with some extra positives happening
in your life and your online business {!firstname_fix}.
After all - if there's something happening that could
dramatically boost your online business efforts.....
Well it could quite literally impact The Rest of Your Life
couldn't it {!firstname_fix}?

All I can say for now {!firstname_fix}, is watch out for my
email Tomorrow.

And be ready to think about the saying in a much deeper
way...

Quite literally {!firstname_fix}...
"Tomorrow is the First Day of the Rest of Your Life!"

Until Tomorrow....
John
P.S. I'm really excited about this....and I'm bursting to
tell you {!firstname_fix}.....  but hey - not long now ;)
Don't miss that email  {!firstname_fix}.


________________________________________


Launch
Subject:
All is Revealed {!firstname_fix}, And I Reveal All .... ;-)


Body:
Hi {!firstname_fix},

John Thornhill here, Ready to give you The NAKED Truth!

LOL...
OK - Enough of the puns {!firstname_fix}, let me explain
them.

All is Revealed.
I can finally tell you what I've been working frantically
on these last few weeks.
Something I honestly believe, scratch that, I KNOW you'll
think is fantastic {!firstname_fix}.

I'm launching my Brand New Product Today
http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com [insert RANDY'S LINK here]

And I Reveal All....
As it says on the description page {!firstname_fix},
I've been doing my best to steer you in the right
direction to make a real success of your business
for years through my newsletter.....

But there's only so much I can tell you in there, and a
lot of my subscribers are at different levels of experience
too.
So the point in 'PlanetSMS Digital Mentorship Monthly' is
a whole new ball game {!firstname_fix}.

I'm going to be Revealing Exactly
What I Do...
How I Do It...
The Results I Get...
And Helping You Copy my Success..
{!firstname_fix}, the list goes on...

Let me tell you Why this is Exactly what You need {!firstname_fix}.

For a long time now I've been forming relationships with
people and helping them where I can, naturally people
have tried to help me in return....
It's a two way street you know {!firstname_fix}.

Well one of the major things that became apparent was,
that whenever I helped people on a 'one to one' basis,
and really got into the nitty gritty of building an online
business...
They Made Money and Became Successful in their own
right {!firstname_fix}!

Put Simply - They were serious about earning a regular
income, They committed to following my footsteps and
just wanted to be shown how,....

But in a Simple and Easy to follow manner.

So for months I've been mentoring some of my people,
answering their emails, offering advice on what I'm doing
and how they can watch closely and do the same.
The end result is that they achieved their success {!firstname_fix}.

So here we are Today {!firstname_fix},
(The first day of the rest of your life - remember).
And in an effort to duplicate the success my mentoring has
brought to many others, I'm launching ....
'PlanetSMS Digital Mentorship Monthly'
http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com

This way I can help so many more people, and build even
more close relationships with tomorrows successful
marketers, like you {!firstname_fix}!

I sincerely want to see your name {!firstname_fix}, as one
of the names of successful markets I'll be promoting
in the not too distant future. So I invite you to come and
claim your spot right now.

And before you even take a look at the description of
everything that you'll get to make your learning simpler
and easy to accomplish, let me tell you right now that this
will not be costing you an arm or a leg, It wont be 777 or
495, 197, 97 or any of those usual figures.

{!firstname_fix}, I Really do mean it - I want to help you,
I love the emails I get from friends I've helped, I want
you on that list telling everyon'e you know that I'm a normal
guy who helps other normal people!

So when I say come and join me for $10 ....
I mean that too {!firstname_fix}
http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com

Before you ask {!firstname_fix}, It is the real price not
some gimmicky offer, because I know you'll discover so
much that you'll stay with me to build something long term
together.

But don't leave it too long, there is a
'first mover advantage' element involved...
(you'll need to read through the description to discover
it) ;)

So have a look through the description and think about how
much it will help you to be involved {!firstname_fix},
and I'll see you on the other side.

If you haven't clicked through yet {!firstname_fix},
Here's the description page:
http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com

To profiting together

John

P.S. {!firstname_fix}, don't even pause here - just take a
look at how you can affect your success today.
http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com 



________________________________________

Follow Up

Subject:
A Personal Note of Thanks to You {!firstname_fix}, - You're appreciated!


Body:
Hi {!firstname_fix},

John Thornhill here,

Two quick things {!firstname_fix},

Firstly..
I wanted to Thank You for helping me make my launch a
tremendous success.
I've had so many people promoting this for me, it's
easier to say thanks on mass to each and every one of you.

I should have known helping you all in the past would
comeback to me - but I didn't expect such overwhelming
support.
So thanks {!firstname_fix}, for whatever part you played.


Secondly...
Just in Case....
I've heard some emails didn't get through and I'm hoping
that you didn't miss my last two emails about
'PlanetSMS Digital Mentorship Monthly' {!firstname_fix},

http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com

If you were one of the people to miss them {!firstname_fix},
... here's a quick run down...

It's been a fantastic launch for me {!firstname_fix}, and
I'm going to make sure I live up to my promises and
everyon'e's expectations.

Hopefully you're already a member and looking forward to
watching exactly ...

What I Do...
How I Do it...
The Results I Get...
And more importantly, you're looking forward to Copying my
Success..

Here's an interesting point just in case you missed the
launch emails {!firstname_fix}.

Ask me how I did so well on the launch...
Did you ask yet {!firstname_fix}?

Great .... I'm so glad you asked ...lol

Seriously {!firstname_fix}, It was a great launch because
of the relationships I've made..
And that's one of the main points of focus here {!firstname_fix}.

Just about everybody I've ever given the same simple, easy
and practical help and guidance to, that I intend providing
for 'PlanetSMS Digital Mentorship Monthly' members, has
added to their successful businesses by returning the
favour and promoting me.

If you've not yet seen the description page {!firstname_fix},
do take a look at the reasons why you would want to be a
part of this.
I assure you it wont be because the price to join is only
$10....

I really have had people tell me to charge anything from
double to five times as much, but they have the advantage
of knowing first hand, the value they've added to their
marketing efforts through my advice.

They are already profiting regularly in their own right
from watching 'closely' and implementing what I showed
them.
Just like you can {!firstname_fix}, from all the simple and
easy ways you'll discover by being a membe'r.
http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com

{!firstname_fix}, I don't want this to be a really long
email telling you exactly why you should check the
description page if you missed the other emails.

I'd rather you took a look for yourself, and think about
the ways you'll profit from joining us.

Picture how much more successful you'll be with the
guidance of someone who's already making his full time
living from multiple streams of income off the internet.

Think about the feeling you'll have knowing just what tools
I use and then having access to them, How's it going to
feel to be able to ask for specific answers when you're
really stuck {!firstname_fix}, and then knowing you'll get
the answers that will lead you on to success -
(not just another pitch to bu'y another ebook full of
...well we've all been there before)

{!firstname_fix}, I'm saying too much here already - do me
a favour, click over to the description and see for yoursel'f
why you'll want to try me out .....

One last point {!firstname_fix}, - $10 isn't much of a
risk compared to the many, many offers you get in your
inbox everyday..... but coupled with a 56 day guarante'e....!!

Let me be there for you too {!firstname_fix}, and lets
build our business and relationship together.

 

John

P.S. In case you hadn't heard {!firstname_fix}, There is a
'first mover advantage' and if you act quickly - you'll
still qualify.  http://www.mentorshipmonthly.com

 
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