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{!firstname_fix}, Your Chance to 'Dig In' with a Special Forces Guy!
It Doesn't Happen Often, Does it {!firstname_fix}?
The Real Secret That Isn't {!firstname_fix}!
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Subject:
{!firstname_fix}, Your Chance to 'Dig In' with a Special Forces Guy!
Body:
Hi {!firstname_fix},
How's your marketing going? I hope you're getting plenty
of action :)
I wanted to tell you about a Unique opportunit'y available
today.
Can't wait go straight here [LINK]
Something so rare - It's easier to liken it to some
children playing in a park.
Children playing action heroes, war games of a sort, good
guys and bad guys.
Did you ever play those type of games {!firstname_fix}?
Usually two sides in some some of strategic play fighting,
Each side doing their best to win the higher ground, to
manoeuvre into positions of strength, and gain an
advantage over the opposing side.
Each side wanting to win,
There would always be one who had watched more movies, or
knew a real soldier. They would be the leader and give the
orders to the others.
If they had learnt from the movies - they could see the
whole picture and direct their side, giving valuable info
and commands and watching how the game commenced.
Or at least that was the theory...
Usually tho - children being the way they are - every one
of them would want to be the biggest hero rushing out
to take the prize..... but with them all doing the same a
total mess, more often than not entails, and no-one ever
wins.
But at least they all have fun {!firstname_fix}, (and so
they should - they're children)
However in our world of online business, the last thing we
need is a mess!
We need to be organised. We need discipline, And we need
the best strategies!
Imagine for a moment {!firstname_fix} - that we are playing
a war game....
WHAT IF - I could put a Special Forces Guy on Your Team?
Someone who lives in the trenches and has not only
survived, but is rapidly being promoted and earning major
respect from the generals - because he's never lost a
battle yet?
Would you want to stick by him {!firstname_fix}?..... I
know I would!
In fact - I'd want him directing our manoeuvres!
Well - the great news is --- I've got him for our side!
John Thornhill (aka PlanetSMS) has opened his
"Planetsms Digital Mentorship Monthly"
[LINK]
It's a monthly digital newsletter that is from the
"Actual Trenches"
He isn't just saying here's an ebook with some info to
teach you whatever...etc.
No....
He actually SHOWS you Exactly What he's doing
{!firstname_fix},
How He's doing it, and the Results it Achieves!
That's just for starters {!firstname_fix},
You get a video newsletter that shows Step by Step How to
Copy what is working for him.
Imagine seeing it, copying it, and then seeing yourself
duplicate his success!
Think about him being there in Your Trench (Looking at your
business) {!firstname_fix}.
Would you want to ask a few questions? .... yeah me too.
Well that's included too!
In fact there is far too much to tell you about here
{!firstname_fix}.
Your best bet would be to check his description yourself.
See how you'd feel about having a 'Special Forces Guy'
in your trench with you after you've seen what he has to
say.
What will you Think {!firstname_fix},..... When He
Practically Guarantees that you'll win?
Seriously {!firstname_fix} - if you follow his lead - He
will 'Dig In' and promote your product, How heroic is
that?
And before you start thinking he's some sort of Mercenary
who'll charge a Kings Ransom...
I've told you {!firstname_fix}, He's on our side - he
only want a soldiers small allowance.
$10 a month
(which would hardly cover the bullets he'll be shooting
for you - but aren't our soldiers always underpaid...lol)
{!firstname_fix}, I've said too much already (the walls
have ears)
Go and check out what he has to say.... I'm sure you'll
want his expertise and his training with you too.
[LINK]
To Your Victory
[Your Name]
P.S. Can you believe John even throws in the weapons to win
with.... I mean products, tools and private label/ brandable
material that can instantly start making you money!
P.P.S. Don't stay on open ground {!firstname_fix} - Get in
John's trench ASAP ;)
[LINK]
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Subject:
It Doesn't Happen Often, Does it {!firstname_fix}?
Body:
Hi {!firstname_fix},
I have a rare and unique offering today,
Something that I've rarely seen in marketing terms, and
never at this price!
If you can't wait to see check it out now
[LINK]
We all get countless emails from the people earning
full-time off the net, telling us to bu'y their latest
ebook.
Usually filled with claims that it will be the last ebook
we'll ever need (til their next email).
But how often has anyone offered to show us what to do,
month by month, and help us out with question and answer
sessions, special requests, FRE'E products to help us build
our business etc. ?
And when I say Show us {!firstname_fix}, I mean just
that... Show us on video exactly what THEY do and how we
can copy it?
Now you're thinking - Yes I get offerings like this all
the time.
It's called mentoring and it costs an arm and a leg
usually!
Well yes {!firstname_fix}, you're right to a point.
But I'm talking about someone mentoring us and REALLY
showing us WHAT they do...
Not just what they think we Should Do!
Allowing us to see the results of what we could achieve if
we follow their system, even telling us what a 'rookie'
achieved when he did as outlined?
That's what John Thorhill (aka PlanetSMS) is now doing
{!firstname_fix}.
A proper behind the scenes look at what he's getting
results from.
What's really got me excited about it tho - is the fact
that for the first movers - he's can practically guarante'e
an income from following his lead - because he will be
offering to promote your product if it fits his lists!
Imagine that {!firstname_fix}, A full-time marketers with a
great reputation, offering to send your offer to his 28,000+
subscriber base!
Now you don't see that often do you?
Telling you what he's done so you can copy him, then
showing you on video how, and giving you the tools and
products to work with, Even answering your questions!
Does this sound like it's just what you need
{!firstname_fix}?
I'm smiling to myself now - 'cos I half expect you'll be
talking to your screen saying, Yeah, it's sounds superb,
something that would finally get me moving in the right
direction, but I don't have the thousands needed to join!
And that's why I'm smiling {!firstname_fix}..... 'cos I
know something else!
John really wants to build lifelong partnerships with
tomorrows successful people.
(smart thinking if you ask me)
And he knows that you could be one of those people
{!firstname_fix}.
So he's priced his
"Planetsms Digital Mentorship Monthly"
at a ridiculous $10
[LINK]
See, now you're almost smiling :)
Everything I've mentioned plus more for a measly $10
{!firstname_fix}....
When you're earning big time - I think you'll remember
who got you into that league - won't you?
I imagine by now you just want to go and see for yoursel'f
that everything I've said it the way I've described it.
So feel FRE'E to go take a look.
I've grabbed my spot, it's one not to miss out on .....
naturally he can't guarante'e to take on too many people
with the guaranteed promotions - so do wait go take a look
[LINK]
Regards
[Your Name]
P.S. Can you believe it - All that Value and he's even
giving a money bac'k guarante'e!
P.P.S. Are you still here - go take advantage of him while
there's still time - he's either mad as a hatter or a
very clever guy thinking long term relationships.
P.P.P.S. It Doesn't Happen Often, Does it
{!firstname_fix}?
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Subject:
The Real Secret That Isn't {!firstname_fix}!
Body:
Hi {!firstname_fix},
Can I ask you a dumb question?
How many times have we all been promised ..........
"The secrets to our success?"
Here's another one.....
How often were they really secrets?
Well I've got one that I'm going to openly tell you
{!firstname_fix},
WHY?
Because it's not really a secret !
I mean it is - but it's not - but it is .....
Oh well you'll know what I mean when I blurt it out..
The Real Secret of Success is -----
Find Someone Who Is Successful - And Do Exactly What They
Do!
See what I mean {!firstname_fix} - You already knew that
didn't you?
The trouble most of us have - is finding someone who'll be
honest enough to show us EXACTLY what they do.
And then taking it all in...
Being able to quiz them and be shown in detail how to do it
all.
Having the right tools that they use is another issue....
How about having them guarante'e to make you sales ....
ha-ha, now you're laughing aren't you.
Yeah - I know, it sounds like an impossible dream doesn't
it ?
Not Any more {!firstname_fix}!
John Thornhill (aka PlanetSMS) is launching a new service
"Planetsms Digital Mentorship Monthly"
[LINK]
He's an ebay Powerseller with a massive feedback score (do
check it out on ebay)
And now he's really going to let people like you and I
follow him and copy what he does!
Really - but don't tell too many people - I want it kept a
secret....lol
Seriously {!firstname_fix}, part of his service will be
showing you what to do, teaching you how, and giving you
the tools and brandable/Private Label materials to copy
him.....
And Then......
Imagine this for a moment - You've listened, learnt,
copied, and produced your own product in line with his
lists....
Then he almost guarantees you an income by Promoting Your
Product to His 28,000+ Subscribers!!
By now you must realise he can guarante'e the product
promotion part for too many, so you can see why I said I
wanted to keep it secret {!firstname_fix}.
I want to be one of those members and I figured you'd love
the idea of making some real sales too.
So do you want to go straight to his site and get in on our
little secret now?
[LINK]
Or would you rather hear me tell you it's only $10 to join
"Planetsms Digital Mentorship Monthly"
Now you want to know why..... All I can think is he's
either lost his marbles.... (but that's another over used
saying isn't it {!firstname_fix})
OR
More seriously - I think because he's successful - he must
also have an idea how to remain that way, and one darn good
way would be to help tomorrows successful people like you,
In order to establish long term relationships with them....
wouldn't you agree {!firstname_fix}?
Don't take my word for it tho - go check him out and visit
his site.
[LINK]
Put the 'Real Secret' to work for you {!firstname_fix}
Enjoy
Regards
[Your Name]
P.S. In case you're still here - there's even a Money
Back guarante'e.
P.P.S. I'd go and check his ebay id after I'd grabbed my
spot - for $10 you can try him out, check his ebay later
and have some peace of mind knowing that you're in, and
going to succeed with some REAL Help for a change!
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Forum & Email Sigs
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Real Marketing Help from someone who's been there, is
still doing it, and will Show You Exactly How!
Can you afford Not to look if it's only $10 with a money
back guarantee? [LINK]
My Mentor Only Costs $10 - But Amazingly He's Showing Me
His Simple Systems - And They Work!
[LINK]
I'm Stealing His Time, His Knowledge, And His Tools - Then
Making Him Show Me Exactly What To Do!
He Wants Me Earning A Real Income - So He Can Partner With
Me!...... And NO He Isn't Mad - [LINK]
They took my money - gave me False Hope - and Lied to me!
But My New Mentor is Sorting it! For Only $10 - [LINK]
Ever wished someone successful would just show you exactly
what he does? Stop wishing and check out
Planetsms Digital Mentorship Monthly - Just $10 gets you
in.. [LINK]
Ask questions, watch & learn, copy what already works, use
the tools and materials, and don't pay more than $10....
Actually it is possible [LINK]
If you haven't seen - Planetsms Digital Monthly Mentorship
- You're missing out BIG style!
It's only a little click to find out why.... [LINK]
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Blog Post - Review (long)
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Subject:
Review of 'Planetsms Digital Monthly Mentorship'
Body:
A new mentoring program with a difference
Many new online marketers are joining programs and sites that claim to 'mentor' people to success, So is 'Planetsms Digital Monthly Mentorship' any different to so many that don't provide value, Or is is one of the few that do?
[OPTIONAL]
I may be slightly biased in favour of this program - because I have bought products from John Thornhill in the past and he always over delivers and offers great support for those, You might want to check some of his products here to get an idea of the quality of his products before comiting to a monthly fee...
[LIST OF AFFILIATE LINKS TO PLANETSMS PRODUCTS}
After showcasing Johns products, I will endeavour to be objective in discussing his new Internet marketing digital mentorship membership product and just look at the facts.
[End Of OPTIONAL]
[LINK]
The first thing I noted from reading his site is that John Thornhill, known on ebay as planetsms, isn't just promoting it as another 'make money from ebay' type of product.
He does use his ebay id as part of his credentials as a person qualified to teach others, as well as the fact that he has authored some best selling ebooks, and is an ebay powerseller.
What he says about 'the secret to success' being to follow someone who is successful at internet marketing can't be argued with, (provided they are teaching what they know and do to make money on the internet)
This monthly membership goes a lot further than just the mention of selling on ebay though.
It claims to teach exactly what John does to generate multiple streams of income from the internet marketing arena in general.
The claims made on the sales page include:
A Digital Newsletter Delivered to Your Inbox Each Month.
In which he claims to reveal methods he actually uses to make money, and admits many of them are not just from ebay.
Audio/Video Training
Which will show and 'walk us through' what he does and the strategies he employs.
The Tools Required to Help You Succeed.
He includes in the package the tools and private label/ brandable material he says will be needed for some one to start their own online income.
The Opportunity to Get Personal Help.
Offering to have direct contact with subscribers/members to help them where needed (but only on a limited number basis) - so I would assume this may be removed at some point?
A Monthly Question and Answer session.
Promising to answer any marketing related questions
Further 'undefined' help
Offering to be flexible and help as needed with other avenues of making money online such as list building, product creation, sales page building and help with ebay listings.
And Also -
Almost Guaranteed Income.
Where he is offering to promote members products to his subscriber base, in order to help generate them some sale. (I note he does have some small print in there - only promising to promote appropriate products)
This presumably covers him against any obligation to promote poor quality or non related products?
Finally his price for membership is set at $10 per month. (this is where I believe he differentiates himself from many mentoring programs I have seen - most go for the higher end price ticket - this does seem exceptional value if he lives up to his claims)
For which he also offers a money back guarantee. (presumably with it being a clickbank product - he will have had to offer such a guarantee) Never the less it is comforting that one can 'Try' him out without risk or fear of loss, knowing that if he doesn't provide quality and value he would soon be out of pocket.
[LINK] See the site
So that's the sales page and claims outlined, with a few comments from myself where appropriate.
As a brand new service - time will tell if he continues to provide value...
But I can say this much -
I have had access to his first Video Newsletter and can confirm that he does go into great detail of a strategy he is currently using.
He gives details of exactly how to set it up for maximum profit, with a step by step follow along video that any new marketer could easily follow. Clear and simple and with a full explanation of where he did what he did, how to do the same etc.
He then went further than expected and showed exactly how much income and sales this strategy provided from his own business and also for comparison, a new marketer with a smaller list and less experience and no product of his own.
I do believe this will help many and was sufficient to justify the first months subscription without any of the other benefits quoted.
So my conclusion so far is that I genuinely believe this could be a valuable resource and it certainly looks as though planetsms digital monthly mentorship will be a keeper for me.
My recommendation would be to join and try it out. with the money back guarantee the small $10 risk is removed.
I believe new and intermediate marketers will find value and benefit in the first issue.
And surprisingly - even many of the more experienced marketers are not using this particular strategy!
So I wouldn't rule it out assuming the low price would mean there was nothing a successful marketer couldn't learn.
See the sales page here [LINK]
Do come back and post your comments if you found this review useful.
[Your Name]
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Blog Post - News (short)
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Subject:
In the news...
A new mentoing Program - that doesn't break the bank
Body:
In the news this month is John Thornhill's new 'Planetsms Digital Monthly Mentorship'
I've taken a look at this the sales page gives a lot of detail as to what John is doing
See it here [LINK]
And frankly - I would recommend checking it out.
To have someone like John teaching and showing the exact strategies he actually uses to generate multiple streams of income alone is worth the $10 price tag.
He offers a money back guarantee, but goes one better with the rest of the benefits offered,
A big one for me is the chance to have him help members create their own products by following along with what he teaches, and then To Promote Their Products to his 28,000+ list.
This would surely give any marketer new or experienced a helpful boost to sales or even the turbo charged start to their list building. Establishing their own online business.
With question and answer sessions, personal help from John, and a host of other benefits.
I can't imagine anyone not getting excited enough to join.
The video newsletter I've seen outlined a particular strategy in such detail I doubt anyone wouldn't be able to set up an identical campaign... I think a few more experienced marketers will soon hear about it and be implementing it themselves.
The BIG news about this program compared to many others has to be the price though.
In fairness - the quality is second to none from what I've seen already ...
But to charge only $10 really must give every new and previously scammed, frustrated, challenged or otherwise not yet succeeding at making money online, marketer a real sense of hope.
It's not going to be long before you'll see many many people talking about this program.
If you'll take my advice - I'd go and get in now
[LINK] before John's having to turn people away.
A real newsworthy site in my opinion.
If you've tried and failed and been praying for a break ..... you've just been answered!
So get over there while it's still breaking news.
[Your Name]
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Do pop back to my introductory page and check my range of services
Or back to my Testimonials page to see more examples from other marketers.
Or to see More of the work I've done for John go back to the list of John's Copy
Randy
