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Email to send to John's list for Version 2 of
"The 90 Day Powerseller Challenge"
Originally for John's Prsonal use - but was later adapted and entered into John's affiliate area for all to use, after it's initial success with John's List.



[Title]
{!firstname_fix}, - A Sequel that's Better than The Original...


[Body]
Hi {!firstname_fix},

[your name] here,

And I've got Great News about a Fantastic Sequel that
really is -
"Better than the Original!"

No - It's not the 'Caped Crusader'
Or the - 'Webslinging Wallcrawler'
Not Even - 'The Italian Stallion'
And Most Definately Not "Mission Imposible 4 U"
(Hey when is 'Wonder Woman' making a sequel
{!firstname_fix}....She was lovely..lol)

Seriously tho' {!firstname_fix}, There seems to be an
ongoing debate with most sequels, as to whether the
original was better or not. And both camps have their
supporters.

But the Sequel I'm referring to requires no debate...
I'm talking about an ebook that really did show people how
to get started and Finally make some real money from the
internet.

Ordinary everyday people like you {!firstname_fix}.
It has helped countless people .... so much so that
hundreds of them have been selling it on - to help others
benefit from it's detialed 'Step by Step' instructions.
Making it probably the most popular eBook on eBay for the
last 2 years.

Have you guessed what it was yet {!firstname_fix}?
Let me tell you anyway...lol
It was the "The 90 Day Powerseller Challenge"

What made it great, and so popular, was the fact that it
had been written by a powerseller John Thornhill(planetsms)
 - as a 'step by step guide' to what he did to make a full time
living selling on eBay.

He's always invited people to check out his eBay id
(planetsms ) - then they could see for themselves that he
does 'Walk the Walk'.
Because he was fed up of those who just 'Talk the Talk'
but don't actually help people!

He made it plain for people to see that he does make a very
good living by checking his feedback numbers. They could get
a good feel for what he does by browsing his eBay store.

And in "The 90 Day Powerseller Challenge", They could
hear exactly how they could 'copy his roadmap' to making
their dreams into reality.

So why the Sequel {!firstname_fix}?
Basically because times have changed since he started in
late 2002.
Hes' continued to earn a full time living following his own
'Road Map' as laid out in "The 90 Day Powerseller
Challenge".... But he has since found a few 'Super Highways'
on route that he wanted to share....lol

Stop for a moment {!firstname_fix}, and consider people
you've helped in your lifetime...
If you'd found some better ways to improve their lives
with more information on things you'd already helped them
impove upon -- you'd want to tell them wouldn't you?

Think about how satisfied you'd be, if someone they had
helped because of the info you gave them came up to you as
a stranger and thanked you for the help you gave
indirectly! You'd have a fantastic warm feeling in your
heart {!firstname_fix}....Imagine that!

Imagine knowing you could do even more if you just kept on
taking note of lessons learnt and passing them on to
everyon'e you'd already helped.....imagine realising you
could help even more {!firstname_fix}....

Hey I'm almost daydreaming myself here..... back to The
Sequel...lol

So now John's checked through all the steps he originally
laid out, and he's updated them all to make it even easier
to follow the 'Route Map' to being a Powerseller
{!firstname_fix}.

Don't misunderstand tho' {!firstname_fix}, The
Original is still good - and definately still works.
The difference now is the technology and tools available
and a few years more experience ...
'The Superhighways' if you will....
It means he can still Unreservedly guarante'e that Anyone who
follows the 'Step by Step' guide in
"The 90 Day Powerseller Challenge" Version 2 -
Will find the success that's been eluding them, and Will
become an eBay Powerseller....

You can check out the sales page here {!firstname_fix},
http://www.powersellerchallenge.com/
BUT - Don't Order it ! - see below..

What's more {!firstname_fix}, It will be an easier route
for ordinary people, people like me and you
{!firstname_fix} to fianally achieve their goals and
ambitions, to realise their dreams and desires to make that
extra incom'e ...and even turn it into a fulltime income, to
follow John and do what he's done.

And that's why this Sequel is without doubt 'Better than
the Original' {!firstname_fix}!
(Still not as Lovely to look at as Wonder Woman...lol)

But it will make your success so much easier, Step by Step
for 90 days.
So let me ask you {!firstname_fix}...

Are you Up for The Challenge?
"The 90 Day Powerseller Challange" V2?

Great - Well here's the thing....
In marketing terms John, (and I for that matter) wants to
build some long term relationships with people who are going
to be successful, people like you {!firstname_fix}.

So I have a link for you that avoids the salespage, and takes
you straight to the registration page -
to get this great sequel FR'EE ...

http://www.powersellerchallenge.com/updates/

To All Our Success
Regards
[Your Name]
P.S. Remember {!firstname_fix}... This isn't 'Mission
impossible', You are not about to stumble through with
Trail & Error - You're only Challenge is to follow the Map ;) http://www.powersellerchallenge.com/updates/





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